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DIRECTIONS FOR WRITING EXEGETICAL ESSAYS AND ASSIGNMENTS
Terry Paige

 

CONTENTS

Page format

Planning & Structure

A rough guide to exegesis

Plagiarism: definition & warning

Footnotes & bibliography

Some common errors: using abbreviations; in English

My standards for evaluating exegesis papers

Bibliography

 

PAGE FORMAT:

All writing for essays and assignments MUST be DOUBLE SPACED, and must have MARGINS of 1 inch minimum on the top, bottom, left and right. This will make the job of reading easier, and will also facilitate writing corrections and comments on the paper. Papers should be typed or printed.

 

PLANNING AND STRUCTURE:

It is best to have a clear outline of what you intend to write before you begin. Make sure your outline makes sense, and presents the facts in a clear and reasonable manner. Then fill in your outline to make the body of your paper. Have an introductory sentence that tells what you are going to do. Provide a summary paragraph at the end. If your reasoning is not clear, or if there is no apparent reason for your introducing certain facts or arguments into the discussion, the reader will conclude that you yourself are muddled.

If it is an exegetical paper, then the literary structure of the passage should determine the order of the paper in part, with other sections of the paper devoted perhaps to history of interpretation, historical background, or textual problems.

 

A ROUGH GUIDE TO EXEGESIS:

Exegesis simply means "bringing out the original meaning of a passage." Before we ask what scripture says to us personally, we need to ask first what the writer intended to say, by means of studying the literary structure and the historical and theological environment of the writer and/or his audience.

The paper must consider the following items at minimum:

The LITERARY CONTEXT of the target passage. What is the literary structure of the book as a whole, and how does this passage fit into it? What is the immediate context, before and after the target passage (could be a paragraph or a chapter), and does the context affect our interpretation of the passage? (in other words, does the author give any clues as to how a passage is to be understood by where he has put it?).

What is the literary structure of the target passage? This may be simple and obvious (as in a parable), or it may be more complex (as in 1 John). Read the passage through 3-4 times, in context, before deciding on its structure. Commentaries are helpful here.

What is the major point (or points) that the author is making here? What does this passage tell us about his "theology" (in a broad sense)?

Why should this be important to the original reader?

Try to be aware of the writer's use of themes, issues, or terms which appear to be important.

Explain and elaborate on any words/phrases which are of importance to the passage, or are important in the writer's theology, or as literary themes which recur, or terms which the English translation cannot fully or accurately represent (e.g., "flesh" in Paul; "sign" in John).

Remember, your job is to SIMPLY EXPLAIN WHAT IS THERE, not to make up clever outlines with alliterated points, nor to try to come up with something original which no commentary or preacher has ever said before. (Originality is a fine thing, but if it happens it should be a consequence of careful study, not forced into your paper as a goal in and of itself). Write as if your paper were going to be read by someone who has never read the passage.

 

The HISTORICAL CONTEXT of the passage. How does the environment of ancient life (political, social-cultural, industrial/economical, religious) help explain the meaning of the passage? Commentaries will be helpful. Be aware of the chronological and cultural distance between yourself and the original author and his audience. Try to think yourself into their shoes.

What problems is this writing meant to solve, or what issues does it address? How did the author intend to benefit his readers, and why?

 

You may also wish to consider the CANONICAL CONTEXT: what does this passage or this writer contribute to Biblical theology as a whole? Is his the only view on this subject, or is it supplemented in scripture with other perspectives? Is his view found in other NT or OT writers? Is there "tension" between this passage and other Biblical viewpoints? If so, how are we to deal with that?

You may wish to comment on APPLICATION, namely, what has this passage to say to believers/the church today? Are there difficulties in applying it? If so, why, and how would you suggest we try to overcome them and hear the voice of God in scripture? Application must not be the primary focus of the paper, nor take up a very large part of it. If you include this, please make it no more than than 1 page in a longer paper, or 10% in a short paper.

 

PLAGIARISM:

Plagiarism is the copying of sentences or parts of sentences from another author and putting it into your paper as if it were your own writing. No matter whether that other author is a dictionary, a commentary or theological book, or another student's paper, plagiarism is wrong and will not be tolerated. If any student has plagiarized material in his or her coursework, the professor will give no credit for the assignment.

You may always use material from other authors in your writing, provided you show that it is not your own by setting it off in QUOTE MARKS. You must then show the SOURCE of the quote (see on footnotes below). But do not make your paper simply a patchwork of quotes, either. If a quarter of an essay or more is quotes, it looks suspiciously like padding your work. Another way to avoid plagiarism is to re-phrase the quote in your own words (but you should still give a reference to the source). The point is that what you read in preparing for an essay should pass through your mind and your heart first. You should digest it, criticize it, sift the good from the bad or the useful from the useless, think about its implications, compare opinions of different authors, and when you are done express it in your own words. It is inevitable (and good) that we borrow some technical terms, phrases, language from books we read. But if you cannot express yourself in what are basically your own thoughts, then I wonder whether anything you have read has settled between your ears.

 

   FOOTNOTES AND BIBLIOGRAPHY:

Footnotes are placed at the bottom of the page, giving references to works used or other information. You may also use endnotes (placed after the body of the essay, on the last page/s). You must also supply a bibliography, even if you only used one or two books. This does not need to be on a separate page. Please make all foot- or endnote references superscript, for clarity in reading.

 

When do you use a footnote? Whenever:

1) You use the very words of another source (book, journal, magazine, another person's paper or even a movie or live voice), even if it is only three or four words in a row. In this case you are quoting, so you must enclose the words you have borrowed in quotation marks and the footnote tells where the quote comes from.

2) You use information that is not common knowledge, that is derived from your reading or other source. For instance, I know that it is not commonly taught in high school that Corinth was destroyed in 146 B.C. and refounded by Julius Caesar in 44 B.C. That needs a footnote.

3) You have adopted a method of arguing, or a way of viewing the evidence, from one of your sources. Here even if the words are yours, the idea comes from someone else, and it is only courtesy to acknowledge this. In fact, it is intellectual fraud to pretend you have not used someone else. Positively, acknowledging this in a footnote can also lend credibility to your argument by saying there are scholars who agree with you.

 

Footnotes

Footnote references are written as a single sentence, with parts separated by commas.

Author: put author's Christian name or initials first, then the surname (in normal order). The author of a dictionary article is not the editor of the dictionary, unless no name is given at the end of the article.

Title: underlined or in italics if a book; in quote marks if a journal article. Do not use name of a commentary series as if it were a title (Word Biblical Commentary, New International Commentary on the New Testament, etc.); this is not the title.

Place/Publisher/Year: put in parentheses, punctuated thus: (Place: Publisher, year). Do not include publisher & place with journal articles.

Journals: list the name of the journal underlined or italics (as if a book), then the volume number, the year in parentheses, and the page numbers (see example below).

Dictionary and Encyclopedia articles: are like a mixture of book and journal. Cite by the author of the article (not the editor of the dictionary), article title in quotation marks. Then say that this article is "in New International Standard Bible Encylopedia" (or whatever the title of the work is), "edited by ____" (editor). Then give pubisher, place, year, followed by volume and page numbers of article.

First Notes Vs. Subsequent References.

The first time you refer to a source, you must give all the bibliographic information as in the examples below.  The second and subsequent notes that refer to this source need only refer to the work by author(s) name  (see note 7 below).  If you have more than one source by the same author, use the last name and a shortened version of the title, followed by the page number.

Examples:

1. Graham Stanton, The Gospels and Jesus (Oxford: Oxford University 
     Press,
1989), 34-58.

2. Paul Meyer, "The Holy Spirit in the Pauline Letters," Interpretation
     33 (1979): 3-18. [this means volume no. 33, issued in 1979, pages
     3-18]

3. Terence Paige, "Holy Spirit" in Dictionary of Paul and His Letters,
     ed. G. F. Hawthorne and R. P. Martin (Downer's Grove:
     InterVarsity, 1993), 404-413.

4. M. R. Mulholland, Jr., "Sociological Criticism" in New Testament
     Criticism & Interpretation, ed. David A. Black and David S. Dockery
     (Grand Rapids: Zondervan, 1991), 297-316.

5. Wofgang Schrage, The Ethics of the New Testament, transl. D. E. Green (Philadelphia: Fortress, 1988), 13.

6. W. S. LaSor, D. A. Hubbard, and F. W. Bush, Old Testament Survey: 
     The Message, Form, and Background of the Old Testament
(Grand 
     Rapids: Eerdmans, 1982), pp. 26-39.

7. Stanton, 50.
 

Bibliography

The same information is given in a bibiography as in footnotes, except:

(1) books and articles are listed by author's last name, alphabetically arranged. Author's name is given in the order first, last.

(2) the parts are separated by a period, and so there are no parentheses around the publisher/year (except with journals, where the year is put in parentheses).

Bibliographies are not numbered.

Examples:

LaSor, W. S.; Hubbard, D. A.; and Bush, F. W. Old Testament Survey:
     The Message, Form, and Background of the Old Testament.
Grand
     Rapids: Eerdmans, 1982.

Meyer, Paul. "The Holy Spirit in the Pauline Letters." Interpretation
     33 (1979): 3-18.

Mulholland, M. R. Jr. "Sociological Criticism" in New Testament
     Criticism & Interpretation,  eds. David A. Black and
     David S. Dockery, 297-316.  Grand Rapids: Zondervan, 1991.

Paige, Terence. "Holy Spirit" in Dictionary of Paul and His Letters,
     eds. G. F. Hawthorne and R. P. Martin, 404-413. Downer's Grove:
     InterVarsity, 1993.

Schrage, Wofgang.  The Ethics of the New Testament. Translated 
     by D. E.
Green. Philadelphia: Fortress, 1988.

Stanton, Graham. The Gospels and Jesus. Oxford University Press,
     1989.
 

 

SOME COMMON ERRORS TO BE AVOIDED:

1. Abuse of Abbreviations . The following abbreviations are commonly misused. Note the punctuation as well as usage:

cf. = Latin confer, `compare'; usually used to compare opinions or scripture verses similar to the one being discussed.

e.g. = Latin exempli gratia, `for example'

etc. = Latin et cetera, `and so forth', `and others like it'

ibid. = ibidem, `in the same place'. Used in footnotes or endnotes, when you are referring to the same book and the same page as in the previous footnote. Since it always refers to the very last book cited (whether or not that was by the author you intend to cite), be careful in using. Can be used with the same book and a different page if the page number is cited. idem = `the same' (author)

i.e. = id est, `that is'

v. / vv. = verse/verses. Note the full stop; and that there is always a space between this and the verse number. NOT used when the book and/or chapter are cited (e.g., Jn 1:14). Examples:

a) Chapter three contains a reflection by the author in vv. 31-36.
b) The author's reflection on the Son of Man is at Jn 3:31-36.

2. Incomplete, Awkward, or Unclear Sentences.

Sentences must have verbs in them! Try reading through your work out loud once before handing it in, or have someone else proof read it. Make sure it is clear what you are saying and why you are saying it. Remember, you are graded on what you write, not on what you meant or intended to write.

Evaluating Exegesis Papers

You may wish to know that the following are the standards I use to judge and grade exegetical assignments:

1) Bibliography: should contain one or more Bible Dictionary/Encyclopedia articles; four or more journal articles (Dictionary of Jesus and the Gospels or Dictionary of Paul articles do not count); three or more commentaries, preferably using one of the recommended texts; a theological dictionary, Greek lexicon, or similar tool for word studies. Other monographs are optional. Items in the bibliography should be used in the paper, and referred to in the paper. Do not list anything here that you have not read (at least in part).

2) Quality of sources: are scholarly books and journals used, or popular and devotional type literature? Are the facts up-to-date? Does this reflect the best of recent scholarship? No sources before 1965 should be used, unless on my list of "standard exceptions," writers who are truly gifted and classic in a way that transcends their time.

3) References. The paper should cite specific passages in Paul that are being discussed, and when they are being discussed. Proof of assertions that Paul or the early church thought this or did that must be given. The reader should know where to turn in scripture to find what you are talking about. The same goes for other portions of scripture referred to. For instance, don't just say, "Jesus taught . . ." or "the Old Testament view was . . .", but give specific examples. These are primary references.

The paper should also make ample use of secondary references. Whenever the student uses information from a book or article, it must be documented whether or not there is a direct quote. Information that is obvious, or seems to be derived from a simple, unsophisticated reading of the text is exempt; otherwise, the source of information must be given.

Items in the bibliography should be used in the paper, and referred to in the paper. If you take time to read a book or article and put it in the bibliography, you can refer to its contents at least once, even if you disagree with the author. If you make no reference to a source, the professor will regard it as not having been read and therefore not counting as part of the bibliography.

References should follow the footnote standard for Biblical and Historical scholarship, given in the class handout. (Chicago Manual of Style / Turabian).

4) Use of historical, background information and word studies. Is the reader told what the original audience would have thought of this message? What the original significance of important concepts and words would have been (e.g., redemption, propitiation, Christ, etc.)? Is the reader told why background or technical information is being given and what effect it has on understanding the text, or is information carelessly thrown at the reader without explanation? In what ways does the world of the Biblical author differ from ours? In what ways is it similar? How do we build bridges from the text and that world to our world? What situations in our world correspond to the situations addressed by scripture? For word studies, test your comprehension by attempting to restate key terms in other (everyday English) words.

One may ask how this writer's message is similar to, influenced by, or differs from: (1) the OT; (2) second temple Judaism; (3) the teaching of Jesus; (4) other NT authors; (5) the pagan Greco-Roman world [philosophic writers, historians, literary authors and dramatists; orators; popular views evidenced from inscriptions, papyri, ostraca, or other evidence. . .]; (6) the early church.

5) Organization of paper: is there a clear and logical order to the way things are presented? Are things grouped together that belong together? Are things thrown together in a haphazard or unclear way? Are there good opening and closing statements?

6) Argument: is evidence given to support the point of view? Is the evidence good? Where there is a problem or controversy, is more than one side shown? Is the argument clear, logical (from a Christian perspective) and convincing? Does it use scripture appropriately? Is it easy to follow?

7) Treatment of the text: The paper should show awareness of the literary context of the Biblical text. There should be a clear discussion of the flow of thought of the text; a sensitivity to what the key issues, words, and ideas are; an avoidance of irrelevant or unimportant details. The reader should be able to tell what the text is about and how Paul makes his point without needing to search the NT text. The original significance of the writer's words and thoughts should be explained in modern terms. Avoid "explaining" one technical expression by another.

8) Canonical context: are connections drawn between this writer's thought and the OT? Are connections noted to Jesus or to other NT authors? (e.g., for Paul, between his teaching and that of and Jesus; for Luke, note links with the teaching of Paul or Peter).

9) English: Is the paper written in clear English, in complete sentences, using words properly? Correct spelling? Are transitions between sections, or from one topic to another, clearly marked? Is there a clear introduction and conclusion?

For further help, the student may consult:

The Chicago Manual of Style, 14th ed. University of Chicago Press, 1993. Ref. Z253 C572

Fee, Gordon. New Testament Exegesis. Philadelphia: Westminster, 1983. BS2331 F44

Fee, Gordon, and Stuart, D. How to Read the Bible for All Its Worth. Grand Rapids: Zondervan, 1982. BS600.2 F43

Hagner, Donald. Writing Exegesis and Research Papers in New Testament Studies: A Guide for Seminarians. Published by the author, 1984. On reserve in library.

McKnight, Scot. Interpreting the Synoptic Gospels. Grand Rapids: Baker, 1988. BS2555.2 M39

__________. Introducing New Testament Interpretation. Grand Rapids: Baker, 1989. BS2361.2 I58

Morgan, Robert and Barton, John. Biblical Interpretation. Oxford University Press, 1988. BS511.2 M67

Osborne, Grant. The Hermeneutical Spiral. Downers Grove, IL: InterVarsity, 1991. BS476 O79

Schreiner, Thomas R. Interpreting the Pauline Epistles. Grand Rapids: Baker, 1990. BS2650.2 S36

Stein, Robert H. Playing by the Rules: A Basic Guide to Interpreting the Bible. Grand Rapids: Baker.

Turabian, Kate L. A Manual for Writers of Term Papers, Theses, and Dissertations, 6th ed. Chicago: Univ. of Chicago Press, 1996. LB2369 T8

 

Conzelmann, Hans, and Lindemann, A. Interpreting the New Testament. Transl. S. Schatzmann. Peabody, MA: Hendrickson, 1988. BS2330.2 C66