Dr. Laurie A. Dashnau

[Advanced Composition]

[Enrichment]

[Houghton College]

[Principles of Writing]

[Professional

[Writing References]

Famous Devotionals, Speeches, Hymns, and Essays:                       

Adolf Hitler's Speeches

Anna Quindlen's Commencement Speech at Mt. Holyoke College

Back to the Bible Devotions

"Be Thou My Vision" (Hymn)

Cyber Hymnal

E. B. White's "Once More to the Lake"

"Everybody's Free to Wear Sunscreen"

Fifty Years of Great Speeches--Real Audio

Goebbels on Hitler as a Speaker

Great American Speeches

History Channel

History Place

Lend Me Your Ears by William Safire [Book Review]

Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address

"The Mighty Scourge of War" (Re: Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address)

More Great Speeches--Real Audio

New Song Ministries: Midi Hymns

NewsMax.com Speeches

Online Speech Bank

"Political History: Lincoln's Gettysburgh Address"

World's Greatest Speeches

 

Syllabus:

Houghton College

English 101-A, -C, and -F: Principles of Writing (P.O.W.)

MWF 8:00-8:50 a.m. (Academic Building 123), 9:00-9:50 a.m. (Academic Building 123), and 11:50 a.m.-12:40 p.m. (Academic Building 327)

Spring 2003

 

And whatever you do, whether in word or in deed, do it all in the name of the Lord Jesus…  Col. 3:17a (NIV)

 

BASIC INFORMATION:

Instructor: Dr. Laurie A. Dashnau                                                

Office: Academic Building 100-B   

Office Hours: MWF 10:00-10:45 a.m.  

and 3:15-4:00 p.m., T 9:00-10:45 a.m.

and by appointment  

 

Campus Phone: x5140 (off campus: 585-567-9514)      

Home Phone: 567-8995

 

REQUIRED TEXTS AND SUPPLEMENTARY MATERIALS:

Ellsworth, Blanche, and John A. Higgins.  English Simplified.  9th ed.  New York: Addison-Wesley, 2001.

Eschholz, Paul, Alfred Rosa, and Virginia Clark, eds. Language Awareness. 8th ed. New York: St. Martin’s P, 2000.

A binder in which to keep handouts. You very well may want to date these, keeping them in order.

A regular pocket folder for journal entries, which may be word-processed or hand written on standard size paper.

A portfolio: i.e., a folder or large envelope for submitting essays and their accompanying materials (drafts, reader response logs/letters, revisions, etc.).

Ready access to your laptop computer, computer printer, computer paper, and fresh ink cartridges. 

Several class readings will be placed in our class folder (see handout).  In order for you to engage actively in the discussion and marking up of these readings, it is absolutely imperative for you, when asked, to run off and bring with you to class individual hard copies.

A blank cassette tape and a cassette player.  Your instructor will be commenting on your major drafts and revisions, beginning with Essay #1, via this method.  Responses via cassette tapes 1.) truly allow you to retain control over your essay’s direction by springing off of encouragements and questions as much as if not more than actual or perceived mistakes, complimenting the idea that writing is an ongoing, recursive process; 2.) challenge you to listen carefully for matters of voice and look for patterns of error that you otherwise might be tempted to overlook or simply hope to have “corrected” for you; and 3.) allow your instructor to dialogue with you much more thoroughly and specifically than do traditional written comments.

A college-level dictionary and a thesaurus are highly recommended.

A backup disk. (Be sure to keep copies of your various drafts and revisions throughout the entire term).

 

COURSE PHILOSOPHY:

The Department of English and Communication, in support of that part of the Houghton College mission which states that Houghton graduates should "be competent in the essential skills of…communication…and problem solving," offers Principles of Writing as a foundational course.  Writing will be approached as a process that involves intellectual clarity, rhetorical dexterity, and mechanical competence.  The student who completes this course successfully will experience writing as a tool for the discovery of meaning and of self, as well as for the discovery of the relationship between various readers and writers and the world at large.  The ability to communicate effectively, both verbally and in writing, is absolutely essential to success in college and in most vocations.  Thus, enthusiasm in and dedication to this course should pay rich dividends now and in the future.

Each student will be challenged to understand writing as a valuable, stimulating, challenging, and enjoyable means of thinking and communicating.

As Professor Newman of Towson University writes,

Etymologically speaking, an essay is a “try,” an “attempt,” an “experiment,” and yes, an “effort.” 

Sixteenth-century French author Michel de Montaigne used the term not to suggest that his writings were unfocused or unfinished, but to signify their departure from the rigid genres that had

existed previously.  Today’s definition of the essay, “a short literary composition on a single subject, usually presenting the personal views of the author,” retains this sense of freedom and flexibility.  Although an essay may begin as a means of inquiry (Flannery O’Connor observed, “I write because I don’t know what I think until I read what I say”), a successful essay communicates the writer’s personal perspective and experience to the reader.  The essay’s relatively brief quality calls for qualitiescharacteristic of any good writing—unity, clarity, grace, and impact.  In this class, you will improve your writing style and strengthen your individual voice as a writer by studying some of the best...essayists, by reading and practicing the principles of effective style, and by writing essays of your own.

 

COURSE OBJECTIVES:

-To understand and use an effective writing process (of generating ideas, of selecting and arranging them, and revising and evaluating them) to produce clear, competent, and coherent writing that is appropriate in tone and style to the writer’s audience and purpose;

-to recognize and use the conventions, principles, and standards of academic and expressive writing;

-to understand and use the specialized terminology used in discussions of the writing process (including the author’s point of view, audience considerations, and the connotations and denotations of language);

-to organize essays logically, with smooth transitions between and within paragraphs, around a clear thesis and via easily recognized topic sentences;

-to choose an appropriate method to propose, develop, and refine an idea in writing;

-to summarize, paraphrase, quote, and critically respond to research materials used to support one’s claims;

-to be constructively critical and encouraging of one’s own and one’s classmates’ writing;

-to appreciate the way words shape and reflect one's reality of the world and to be able to use vivid, engaging language towards that end;

-to review and apply grammar conventions re: sentence and clause types, parts of speech, active v. passive voice, etc. in such a way as to add energy and stylistically vary one's writing;

-to begin to use library and information technology resources;

-to become acquainted with the basics of Modern Language Association (MLA) documentation; and

-to challenge you to explore and discuss how one's and one's classmates’ writings address international, national, local, spiritual, and personal values and concerns.

 

NATURE OF THE COURSE:

1. Class attendance and active participation are expected.  A course in the principles of writing is a great occasion for asking questions, testing thoughts, and sharing insights. Each student has something unique to contribute to the class, and it is my sincerest hope that everyone will contribute on a daily basis. Furthermore, the amount of in-class writing, group work, and peer editing this course entails makes each student’s attendance and participation essential to the integrity of the community of learners as a whole--in short, an ethical responsibility as well as a personal and academic opportunity.

Unfortunately, there is no way to make up in-class work fully, but if someone cannot avoid missing a class, he or she is responsible for all material covered and any announcements made.  Coming to class or conferences late or leaving early will make it hard for everyone to follow along. Therefore, each lateness or early dismissal will count as one-half of an absence. The good news: students who miss no more than one class will have an extra percentage point added on to their final grades.

Students who miss more than a week’s worth of classes (three meetings) not only will be urged to drop the course, but also will forfeit a minimum of half (five percentage points) of their class participation grade.  Only in the case of documented emergencies will any exceptions/accommodations be considered.

See me in advance if you know you will be missing a class, and let me know when you are ill. Be sure, too, to pick up any handouts missed.

2. Academic honesty is crucial. Please familiarize yourself with various understandings of what constitutes plagiarism and other ethical violations, as well as the ramifications of its discovery.

 

EVALUATION:

Essay #1: 8%

Essays #2, 3, and 4: 12%

Essay #5: 16%

Group Presentation on Essay #5: 3%

In the case of second+ revisions for any two essays out of the first five, new grades will completely replace old grades provided that drafts and first revisions truly reflected good faith efforts.  For second+ revisions of any essays beyond the two required revisions, the old grade and the new grade will be averaged.

Quizzes on Writing, Rhetoric, Vocabulary, Grammar, Style, Etc. (dates TBA): 5%

Shorter Assignments (with assignments given outside of class weighing more heavily than those completed in class): 16%

Participation (which presupposes attendance and includes reader response log groups and student-instructor conferences as well as class discussions): 16%

 

DUE DATES:

Essay #1 (Comparison/Contrast Re: Writing Advice) complete draft and two extra copies due: Wednesday, January 22 revision and all accompanying materials due: Friday, January 24 (second+ revisions: F, Mar. 21)

Essay #2 (Reflective Narrative Essay) complete draft and two extra copies due: Friday February 7 revision and all accompanying materials due: Wednesday, February 12 (second+ revisions: F, Mar. 21)

Essay #3 (Descriptive Profile/Slant) complete draft and two extra copies due: Wednesday, February 26 revision and all accompanying materials due: Monday, March 10 (second+ revisions: F, Apr. 25)

Essay #4 (Explanatory Paper Re: The Power of a Name, Word, or Phrase) complete draft and two extra copies due: Wednesday, March 26 revision and all accompanying materials due: Monday, March 31 (second + revisions: F, Apr. 25)

Essay #5 (Analysis and Evaluation of an American Speech) complete draft due for grade: Wednesday, April 16 revision and all accompanying materials due: by beginning of final exam period (see below)

“Final Exam Period” (for Group Presentations on Essay #5)

Section A (MWF 8:00-8:50 a.m.): Saturday, May 3, 10:30 a.m.-12:30 p.m.

Section C (MWF 9:00-9:50 a.m.): Saturday, May 3, 1:30-3:30 p.m.

Section F (MWF 11:50 a.m.-12:40 p.m.): Tuesday, May 6, 4:00-6:00 p.m.

 

PROCEDURAL POLICIES:

All copies of complete drafts are due on time, at the beginning of the class period, for reader response log completion. The penalty for an incomplete or missing draft and/or absence on a draft workshop day is a full letter grade.

Revisions are due at the beginning of the class period on the day specified. However, once a semester a student may hand in a revision (not a draft, as drafts always are due on time) up to one class period late with no penalty. This policy is referred to as "taking one’s grace period."

Shorter assignments given outside of class also are due at the beginning of the class period specified. Since I do, however, realize that emergencies may arise, your lowest shorter assignment grade will be dropped provided that you have had regular attendance (no more than two classes missed).

Moreover, in order to pass the course, students must turn in all major essays and receive a grade of at least 50% on each one of them.

Remember that there are many ways to participate: making comments, posing questions, reading aloud, bringing in supplementary materials to share with the instructor and the class, etc. Please, do not be bashful! The more you contribute, the more informative and spirited class will be.

 

EXTRA CREDIT OPPORTUNITIES (up to 3%):

In addition to the attendance incentive bonus addressed above, other possibilities will be announced.

 

GENERAL GRADING CRITERIA:

The following criteria are ranked in order of importance and will be referred to throughout the term:

1.) development of ideas and fulfillment of the nature and purposes of each particular essay;

2.) insight and originality;

3.) organization, coherence, and unity;

4.) stylistics (inc. varied sentence and paragraph lengths and lead-ins);

5.) MLA documentation;

6.) mechanics (spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.).

 

"A" Paper: The ideas in the paper are original, creative, and thought provoking. The paper is well organized and the thesis or dominant impression is clear throughout the piece. The writer has a thorough understanding not only of the subject matter, but also of his or her own relation to it, of his or her audience’s needs and desires, and of his or her specific purposes for/goals in writing the piece. He or she uses an appropriate tone, level of diction, and a mature style. The paper is free of mechanical errors and is presented professionally.

"B" Paper: The ideas are sound and the paper is structured effectively. The thesis is clear and the writer shows an overall awareness of audience and purpose. The paper is relatively free of surface errors. Although it lacks the mature style or the distinctiveness of the "A" paper, it is very well written. It may be just a little to broad or narrow in its scope for its nature and purpose and hence need more focusing or invite further development.

"C" Paper: This is an average, competent paper. There will be sections that will be written quite well, but other parts of it may be problematic or seem distracting/less purposeful. There may be problems in one or more of the following areas: organization, development, tone, focus, or audience/writer awareness. Often there are noticeable surface or mechanical errors that impede the paper’s readers.

"D" Paper: This paper indicates the writer’s lack of mastery of the assignment. For example, a student might write a basic summary/report instead of a narrative/descriptive essay or turn in a "research paper" based only on materials found in general dictionaries and encyclopedias. Often ideas are not presented maturely--i.e., they are neither sustained throughout the piece nor backed up with examples or documented evidence. The thesis or dominant impression is muddled or too multifaceted to be given fair treatment. Sometimes such a paper is thrown cut and pasted together without much thought, planning, or revision. Other times the paper is a sincere beginning effort and can be salvaged. Surface and mechanical errors often impede the paper’s readers.

"F" Paper: This paper shows no sustained efforts over the course of the semester. It is thin in content and lacks purpose, focus, strategy of development and organization, and/or writer commitment and audience awareness. Any paper that is plagiarized--i.e., one that is not the writer’s own work or one in which the writer makes glaring omissions in terms of citing fully his or her source--will, of course, receive a grade of zero. In addition, a plagiarist, being guilty of an ethical breach of conduct, will be subject to academic discipline.

These grading policies have been adapted from the portfolio grading system used at Miami University of Ohio, with special thanks being given to Dr. Don Daiker.  More specific features will be attended to in relation to the assignment at hand.

 

STANDARD PAPER POLICIES:

All written work, including drafts, must be completely legible. Formal essays must be word processed. Shorter assignments may be hand written.

Separate title pages are not necessary for either formal essays or for shorter assignments. Instead, in the upper left-hand corner of the first page of the essay or assignment, simply provide the following information: your name, the course number and section, the essay or assignment number, and the date due. Then center the title of the essay or assignment two lines down.

 

Major Essay Assignments

(under construction - use handout)

 

e-mail Dr. Laurie Dashnau

   Last updated January 16, 2003.

Graphics courtesy of:

A-1 All Free Clipart